I think that the boys themselves are responsible for the DVD but there may have been some media influence like video games and TV shows. Maybe their parents didn’t teach them wrong from right but this is highly unlikely. Maybe they are just sick in the head. Or maybe they just didn’t think before they acted and made a stupid mistake. AlthoughI”m not saying this justifies what they did, it was sick and wrong. But they obviously need help and they should apologose to the girl and make amends. It is SO wrong what they did but everyone deserves a second chance.

well. My story is a bit not finished see! but there are some gramma things i need to work on. everything else seems ok. i look forward to finishing it.

Ok, Jess’s story is about a guy called Nathan and a girl called Kari and Mathan’s pregnant mum. They moved into a new house and the spirits that inhabit it are after them and want them gone. They begin a game where they have to win or the spirits will kill someone. There is alot of suspense in this story and i really like it. Jess was very descriptive and made the stry dramatical in an intense way. they way it is written is brilliant and i think she has done remarkably well. I love her writing. She could improve her spelling a bit and her layout needs fixing but the structure of the story is great! there is one bit where she slips between first person and third person but that can be easily fixed. It is great story and i admire the wirk that has gone into it. Well done jess. If you published this i would go out and buy it! well done!

Well! My holidays were awesome!!!!! On Friday, the day before the holidays began, we drove three hours up to springhurst to see my Grandma. We stayed at her place and we had a bonfire and made awesome jewelery! I got some great photos! Then we came home on Sunday. We didn’t do much for the rest of that week.  Oh! BUt i went shopping with Rachel, Lozi, Lisa and Jono on the first monday. Oh!!!! And Lozi vame round on Friday! She slept the night! I was so excited! we watched movies! And my family embarrassed me! Oh man we laughed our asses off at my disfunctional family! we had a great time That was fun! The second weekwe went to the movies and saw BARNYARD. It was so funny! Then on the Thursday of the second week, my cousins and Aunty from Balarat came down to stay! We went to the movies and saw STROMBREAKER. It was soo cool! I’d read the book and loved it so i was really looking forward to the movie and it didn’t let me down. It was really true to the book which i liked. Alot of movies aren’t true to the books they are based on, it annoys me! yeah. Anyway me and my cousin Ben had a slipper fight! we ran around the house slapping each other with slippers, I won!!!!!! Yay!!!!! Well i had a great time with my cousins. they went home on sunday. yeah so you should be very jealous if my holidays coz they were awesome!